Cover Letter: With this paper I was giving the audience an idea of what it takes for me to write a paper and my main point I wanted to get across was procrastination. Throughout the paper I gave a description of what it took and how procrastination came into the way I write a paper. I incorporated some of the articles to explain how as a writer I am beginning to look at writing in a different way in the hopes it will help. I think the part in the paper where I give the story of how I write was a part that I really liked. I want the readers to let me know if they think it flows right and what I should do better or what I need to work on.
http://www.scribd.com/doc/80378285/Paper-2
I really liked how the paper flowed and was not jumping all over the place, which many people struggle with. It was personal and brought the idea of procrastination into it which I really enjoyed. I think it met exactly what Professor Whicker wanted and precise as well. The only think I suggest is to add some flavor into it, throw some funny lines in and descriptive words. More comments on the paper which you can find right here at this link right here --> http://www.scribd.com/doc/80577255/Peer-Review-Madison
ReplyDelete